I Try.

By lstdarkness

I try
to make things work,
pull, fight and struggle,
work for something that
is never there.

I try
to make the words
flow down the page,
cascading like a
waterfall. The words
fall on deaf ears.

I try
to make her see,
I am all she needs.
Love unbound falls
back onto my shoulders,
pushing me deeper into
the sand.

I try
to fight, to make her
want to want me. To see
the potential I see in her,
For her to take chance,
to see I am all she
needs.

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© 2007 lstdarkness
Published on Tuesday, January 23, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • prodigy789 On Tuesday, June 26, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    The third was my favorite!

  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, January 24, 2007, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    oh, anthony, really like this one, seriously, thats just so...powerful, love sucks, ~*dani*~

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, January 24, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    blue found what is my favorite line, as well. I know how you feel, dude.

  • verablue On Tuesday, January 23, 2007, verablue (111)By person wrote:

    "I try to make the words flow down the page, cascading like a waterfall" lovely.

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