verablue
By carlosjackal
For Bazil
electric
girl eccentric
standing poised
on the tip of her pen
pumping poetry
through circuit board veins
screaming violets
desperate for her name
eyes bruised from
too much
meat porn
mysteries
in the hum of the night
buzzing inspiration
she licks
like she spins
beautiful sounds
the crowd
reborn
from skyscrapers
once torn
a heart beating blue
like a wartime
heroine on pills
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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Thursday, March 29, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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On Tuesday, August 1, 2017, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
A girl electric. Swoon. I love the ferocity :)
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A former member wrote:
I don't know who verablue is, but I'm sure this was very well received. I like the vivid imagery in this write, and vivid is always a favorite of mine. Queen Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
I adore this! The raw, vibrant imagery does verablue justice, and echoes her works well.
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A former member wrote:
the best fucking poem 've read so far, really nice awesome job
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On Wednesday, October 20, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner
(48) wrote:
"meat porn mysteries"...so fetishistic, yet completely non-sexual. I like (for lack of a better word) the violence this implies.
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A former member wrote:
this is amazing, as the lovely verablue is..electric and very energetic poem. wonderfully done, carl :).
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, verablue
(111) wrote:
2:14pm...7 and a half hours of sleep and i'm still speachless. no ones written me a poem since i was 15. "pumping poetry through circuit board veins" i love it!
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On Sunday, April 1, 2007, carlosjackal
(3010) wrote:
*swoons*
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, verablue
(111) wrote:
fucking awesome you are!!! i'm a tad bit speachless (but its also 5:42am and i haven't slept yet). i'll be back to read it a few more times in the morning :)
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, verablue
(111) wrote:
also, why the hell were you not on my favorites list?? you should have been on there long ago! my apologies.
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, carlosjackal
(3010) wrote:
You just made my fucking year!!! Thank You, Bazil!!
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On Friday, March 30, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
sweet and sharp, has underlying sound simalarities tying it together without being tied to rhyme. Smooth...like etching cream.
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A former member wrote:
Awesome Carl. -Mar
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A former member wrote:
loved the flow and every word used was absolutely brilliant. ~ saddened.
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A former member wrote:
this was just awesome and got my heart pumping. nice one. i'm guessing she'll like it. lol ~Tamara
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
:} the bestestesetset piece of yours yet. I love it.
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
kick butt poetry!
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
ha! you did her great service, i wonder how the ever hip-vynal queen will take to it? if she is not impressed, then... OFF WITH HER HEAD!.....obviously alice in wonder..never mind.. none the less, awsome!
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
*Vinyl*
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
and meat porn??!! oh the humanity, that stuff is what starlit-dreams are spun from!
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A former member wrote:
how lovely! ~Meaghan
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
This is a lovely tribute :) wonderful.
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
o.O)) this rocks. yup. ~b
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
what a lovely tribute *slaps your arse* youre wonderful Carl :)