Comments by Thorn
- "I liked the spin on this one. It's more raw and unrefined that normal cutter poems, and I think that truly makes it your own. Congrats, Jake. you've taken an exhausted concept, and put an interesting spin on it to make something that's well worth the time"
Posted by Thorn on "On the perforated line" by Nail Bunny
- "And it's been people like this author who have been the driving force behind almost every recent social revolution. It's always been those who have it bad enough to complain, but are well-off enough to speak out."
Posted by Thorn on "To the parents of every teen" by Nail Bunny
- "Jake, you created quite a stir with this one. But what I think the critics fail to recognize is the natural teenage inclination to dissent. This write was not inspired by abusive or controlling parents, but by teen angst and the clash of generations."
Posted by Thorn on "To the parents of every teen" by Nail Bunny
- "Bunny... did I upset you THAT much? Or is this just critical of our lowlife classmates?"
Posted by Thorn on "Scream" by Nail Bunny
- "I only suggested that because it happens to be the finalizing line of the poem."
Posted by Thorn on "Come Alive" by Nail Bunny
- "Hee hee. I smile. You've been reading Raven's Dark Poetry lists, haven't you, Bunny. Well done anyway. It's hard to tell what position you take on following Lucifer..."
Posted by Thorn on "Lucifer Watches" by Nail Bunny
- "Man, do I know what that's like. I can really identify, and I love what you've written here."
Posted by Thorn on "She Used..." by Nail Bunny
