On the perforated line

By Nail Bunny

Cut here
fulfil my desire.
Body awash with
pain,
but the pain of the physical
pales in comparison with the
mental anguish I have been given.

Cut here
in case of emergency,
break skin.
There's blood inside,
crimson tears to shead.
Drops of remorse
rain over the shadowed tatters
of a life once loved.

Cut here
end it all
sleep forever
in the blessed
darkness
empty oblivion
void without knowledge
feeling
existance.

Cut here...


...and die.


...

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© 2006 Nail Bunny
Published on Friday, April 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I gotta get one of those lines, no doubt... novel idea, I love the concept! and a great write

  • Thorn On Saturday, April 29, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    I liked the spin on this one. It's more raw and unrefined that normal cutter poems, and I think that truly makes it your own. Congrats, Jake. you've taken an exhausted concept, and put an interesting spin on it to make something that's well worth the time

  • Thorn On Saturday, April 29, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    *time to read and comment on it

  • PoeticHellion On Friday, April 28, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Shitgod, Jakob (I'm aware that that looks German). Well done. I almost want to like... hit something. Very well written, very powerful. But don't you be doing anything like that anytime soon.

  • Hello Dead Kitty On Friday, April 28, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (29)By person wrote:

    fuckin' a...i like the brutality very very much...ya just gotta love these feelings

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