Come Alive
By Nail Bunny
The flame burns black
the candle dies
our lives play out
'neath angry skies
the melted wax,
like blood pools round
to the sound
of pain profound.
TICK
TOCK-TICK
TOCK
come the diseaded murmers
of a dying clock
a ghostly whisper,
an angry sound
the clink of human bones
echoes 'round
under blue skies,
no sound fills the halls
but the house comes alive
as darkness falls
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Copyright 2005 Nail Bunny
Published on Saturday, August 20, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Come Alive"
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On Saturday, October 15, 2005, the dried flower
(67) wrote:
ooooooo it is scary, i like.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
How about something not completely trite and overdone, like Darkness Falls is. How about since you spent the time to write this, you spend a few more minutes to title it. I can't stand that people would not title something worked so hard on.
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On Wednesday, August 24, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
I only suggested that because it happens to be the finalizing line of the poem.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
sorry, dude. it was late, i was drained. I'll keep it in mind next time...
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On Saturday, August 20, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Pretty good. How about "darkness falls" for a title?
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On Saturday, August 20, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
this wasn't bad.