Valentine's day
By Nail Bunny
Loving hearts
Cracked and bleeding
Stiched together
Always seeming
Quite alright
But tonight
Cupid's darts
Are striking hearts
Dead and rotten
Hurt, forgotton.
Halmark Holiday
no true feeling
just like any day
but emotions reeling
feel alone
undesired
negative
feelings fired
to the breaking point.
2/14
spreads envy green
as green is spent
on where you went
was it enough
to satisfy?
Or will she choose
to say goodbye?
Total stranger
a blind date's better
than the lonliness
of being bitter.
National obsession
need
for for possession.
Desperately need love
singlehood is not enough
even if voluntary
negative stigmas very
prevalent.
ROSES ARE RED,
but embarassment redder.
VIOLETS ARE BLUE,
but diamonds are better.
SUGAR IS SWEET,
but none for you.
Happy Valentine's day
I LOVE YOU too.
Comments on "Valentine's day"
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A former member wrote:
I... love... this. Every thought I have ever had summed up in one poem about V-day. Great work!
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Jake, you're my hero. Shit, I spent VD (Venerial Disease) with Jason and I still hate it.
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Well... you certainly put THAT half-ass holiday in IT'S place...
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
Thanks, i think... (can't tell if you're mocking me or 2/14)
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A former member wrote:
Ahahaha! This is so very wonderful. Every image you've portrayed here, every stinking rotten thing about this holiday, stands out in neon-tendrils. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem....to me, it sounds like u are alone for Valentines Day! lol.
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
I was, a little.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Like a pretty-pink valentines day card with a bear trap hidden inside. Nice.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
I loved it depressing*Cheers*
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A former member wrote:
loved it....
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
omg I totally LOVE this! Happy V~Day Nail♥ ;) This is classic, and so perfect. Great job!! Julia~