She Used...
By Nail Bunny
She used her charms on his weaknesses
it's gonna end in tears.
Emotion got under the skin,
he's built up over the years.
It was a case of pounding blood
rushing to the head,
and now with all the hurt it's caused,
he's wishing one of them was dead.
Oh why Oh why
he almost cried,
why did I do that?
I feel used and so abused,
wish I could take it back.
He's worried for another girl,
one he really cares about.
This could be the blow
that rocks her world,
if she should find out.
And he can't hide the truth for long,
one girl will tell the other.
And so he must tell the truth,
before it goes any farther.
Oh why Oh why
he almost cried,
why did I do that?
I feel used and so abused,
wish I could take it back.
The girl he loves believes him,
thinks the other one's a whore,
and so she's staying with him,
and things will be ok once more.
Comments on "She Used..."
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A former member wrote:
hm... strangly enough i had an experence EXACTLY like that one... COINCEDENCE?
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
wow hey i love it
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On Sunday, July 31, 2005, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Whoa. That's pretty much perfect. Wow.
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On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
yes..very unique
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, Irioth
(7) wrote:
Very powerful and unique.
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
A very fascinating story in a poem. It was creatively written. A nice peice.
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, saellem
(21) wrote:
never had it happen but..i have always beleived once a cheater always a cheater
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Man, do I know what that's like. I can really identify, and I love what you've written here.