Obscene Angel Girlfriends

By Nail Bunny

Obscene Angel Girlfriends,
Fly on the wings of insanity.
Tiaras on their brows,
Halos all askew
A coy smile in their eyes,
A song upon their lips.
The lips, the lips, as red as blood,
as bloody tears drip from their wrists.
Scraps of silk,
from neck to knee,
do little to keep their modesty.

It's you they want,
just you.

But then,
you have been cast off again...

A TOAST!!
To short forevers,
and the girls who promise them!!

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© 2005 Nail Bunny
Published on Friday, October 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Perfect image for an angleic tempting poem like this. Perfect!

  • Gaz On Wednesday, June 17, 2009, Gaz (10)By person wrote:

    I really love this image. You have to admit, the girls that promise the short forevers, usually give you your money's worth. Beautiful Bunny.

  • A former member wrote: *giggles* i love it.

  • Sin On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    *raises glass* bloody brilliant!

  • A Burning God On Monday, October 24, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    that puts a creepy image of an algel who just slit her wrists, and are mostly naked. Creepy image. Sounds like a sacrifice to some sort of primitive god.

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    you missed the point, a little... and mis-spelled angel...

  • A former member wrote: I like...

  • Thorn On Friday, October 21, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    But of course. I'll drink to short forevers and the girls who promise them. Very good, Bunny, I commend you.

  • A former member wrote: "A TOAST! To short forevers, and the girls who promise them!" *Smiles* This is a very very nice piece to read, for the simple fact that it's unique and original. Wonderful descriptions, wonderful wording, wonderful piece. *Evangel*

  • Sticky Kitty On Friday, October 21, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    i agree, very cute piece. Cute but not annoying. nicely balanced. -kitty

  • Philla On Friday, October 21, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Huzzah! lol. Cute and lovely. Great job. -*Philla*-

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