This is your 5am wake-up call

By Nail Bunny

a greesy hamburger wrapper
lies under the back seat
of your mother's car,
where you fucked your girl last night.
Rap blares on the radio,
the pounding bass splitting your skull.
you're still so dead drunk,
you can hardly see.
Where are you?
you don't know
Where is She?
did you take her home?
or did you not make it that far?

Why are you in a forrest?
Is that your girlfriend's blood
on the trunk of that tree?

"What the FUCK did I do last night?"

Good Mourning America


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2005 Nail Bunny
Published on Tuesday, October 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and
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  • FlowMyTears On Saturday, April 18, 2020, FlowMyTears (53)By person wrote:

    Holy shit, it's like the united states is some bullshit construct like god. But at least we are allowed to be crazy here. I love this forum.

  • A Burning God On Sunday, October 16, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    Sounds like something that I'd do. But about five levels dumber.

  • frileyma On Monday, October 10, 2005, frileyma (11)By person wrote:

    Good Mourning America. Great play on words...scary and possible and well written.

  • Irioth On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, Irioth (7)By person wrote:

    Damn this is eerie.

  • A former member wrote: hmmm.. disturbing. nice job with this one. ....-samone

  • redtearswhitesnow On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (79)By person wrote:

    Lol..Nice

  • A former member wrote: *chuckles* ..classic.

  • Thorn On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Damn, Bunny. When did you become so morbid?

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    i dunno. something about religion class just brings out the "best" in me. *chuckles*

  • A Burning God On Sunday, October 16, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    best as in reading best

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