Cry

By Nail Bunny

Cry your sorrows
to Uncle Jack.
Even if you leave,
he'll take you back.
Cry your sorrows away,
and you'll feel better,
though every day,
the cure gets wetter.

Drink,
and Drink,
and Drink
some more,
you'll feel better,
When you hit the floor!

...

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Copyright 2005 Nail Bunny
Published on Tuesday, September 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I used to drink out all of my problems. So I know how you feel. Good job getting the message through so quickly.

  • Thorn On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    I could use a night of drinking...

  • Irioth On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, Irioth (7)By person wrote:

    Very powerful, especially for something so short.

  • A former member wrote: *smiles*

  • Thorn On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Heh... Uncle Jack is my friend.

  • A former member wrote: oh man. this sounds like virtually everybody i know... i like this. its short, its simple, its catchy. whats not to like?

  • A former member wrote: many would say that I can relate to this poem famously...Short, but nice write!

  • A Broken Soul On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, A Broken Soul (81)By person wrote:

    short... humorous... interesting. there's a lot left to the imagination... but I like that.

  • PoeticHellion On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Jake, my friend. You have a strange love for alcohol. I'll never understand you.

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