Comments by All Members
- "ahhh...the treasure of our treasures.
A meeting between our past and our future, our memories and our dreams.
All told in lovely rhyme and meter
punctuated with iconic imagery:
heart too swollen to scold...
my mothers precious possessions...
lent her some for a princess hour...
watching my history repeat ...
a story well told."
Posted by Leineco on "Jewellery box " by Stephanie Sideways
- "I was going to say a bit of reality came to roost in a restaurant perhaps, but then a pub serves nicely too. Every mother will feel the pull of this piece eventually, and you certainly do have the knack for bringing the commonplace, yet unvoiced things to the surface - wonderful Stephy!"
Posted by dwells on "Empty" by Stephanie Sideways
- "this is really a beautiful poem Stephanie. for me its very uplifting and has a very peaceful calm about it. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Empty" by Stephanie Sideways
- "I felt this poem so much, as I wrote it, it made me physically cry. Thanks everyone for all your kind feedback and supportive comments x x x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Empty" by Stephanie Sideways
- "I promise you i had this experience and i held my baby he laughed like the world was so beautiful and it healed me for a moment.. beautifully written stephanie. hello there you . thank you for being faithful i love you ."
Posted by Devilish on "Empty" by Stephanie Sideways
- "I love how you open yourself up! It is a wonderful reminder that we are all gifted and need to share them with others and be proud of them. I'm glad you share your talents with us! :)"
Posted by FearlessDragon on "Friendly beast " by Stephanie Sideways
- "Setting boundaries that agree with our own personal comfort zone can be a bit confining at times. Sometimes we just have to stretch them out a bit, in spite of the internal auditor's screaming - red wine works for me! Well said and an ultra-kool subject that you slid into effortlessly, thanks Stephy!"
Posted by dwells on "Wall of words" by Stephanie Sideways
- "Quite comfy, I think. I do accept. What a pleasant way to construct the truths of this debilitant design some wear in life. To me this is the perfect example of what a poem is. If there was one who did not know I would show them this and say, "See?" and they would understand. Excellently, delicately offered up, Sister Sideways. "
Posted by Unknown on "Wall of words" by Stephanie Sideways
- "that's a beautiful string of beads Stephanie with some real pearls of logic ... shyness can be more restricting than any bonds ... thank you for this :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Wall of words" by Stephanie Sideways
- "Pretty much nailed it fella. Thanks for reading. Trying to work on this style, but can't resist silly rhymes every now and then. Even if I do stretch my syntax occasionally . Much love! X x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Black and Gold" by Stephanie Sideways
- "Men love a wee glimpse of panties ! And I am not adversed to offering it! Hey, thanks. I think I will tweak it at some point as a few ideas keep popping into my head. But I am glad you liked it. Trying to move on from my silly rhymes. ( although they are still fun to write! ) x x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Black and Gold" by Stephanie Sideways
- "this is really an excellent poem stephanie. im in your kitchen staring at the wet floor and the next thing i know im off to this other world to escape in its reflection. i loved that you combined non-fiction into a fictional realm. im super impressed on this one. and so you know i can make a floor so shiny i can see up womens skirts. thats what i daydream about! lol...awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Black and Gold" by Stephanie Sideways
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