Comments by All Members

"I could almost hear the train. So clever and original."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "A Stranger Will Know My Name" by Stranger

"Seeing as I'm a locomotive engineer I enjoyed this work."
Posted by Alchemist on "A Stranger Will Know My Name" by Stranger

"I like this. Makes you wonder if she is dreaming the whole time, or there really was a train in the distance and she absorbed it into her dream. Nice!"
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "A Stranger Will Know My Name" by Stranger

""I do my best work at night". Superb line in a great poem. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "The Nature of Things" by Stranger

"The subtlety here....The rereads that reveal more and more.....And that title....."
Posted by carlosjackal on "An Unintentional Kindness " by Stranger

"Solemn poem but a great write and read. Awesome. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Through the Singularity" by Stranger

"I've the sexy metaphors throughout.. Very tastefully done"
Posted by natalie on "This is Longing" by Stranger

"The thought that went into this is incredible. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"I usually don't go for erotic themes, but this was very tasteful and deep"
Posted by Cassette on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

""Sunlight through her dress tracing the outline of a memory.." Dear goodness that wanting to remember sounds like torture. "
Posted by Unknown on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger

"I typed three comments before this, they weren't good enough for this. God, I hope you've given in, though."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger

"My mind is spinning like a top with the few, juicy possibilities here Stranger. Tell Carmina Gitana that she's missed, if you ever hear from her. A tantalizing image conjured for pain or pleasure with the telling admission that "I cannot help the willing" - Oh ye of weak flesh, Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger

"This should have been POTD a hell of a lot sooner. Fantastic gem of a piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "How a Poem is Born" by Stranger

"This was achingly sad. I enjoyed it immensely. "
Posted by Sin on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"this is powerful! post more!"
Posted by worm on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"Ah, the classic missionary position as told through the mouth of what appears to be a missionary. This is so erotic, and so well wrought, and I love it! Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"hot and very deep i like it good job "
Posted by Nemo on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"I loved the imagery in this one. Also, it had a very interesting ending. Well done. - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Stranger and the Snow Queen" by Stranger

"whoaaaa, well damn, i just saw words come out in power amazing! insane my friend thank you for this. "
Posted by SilenttPerception on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"YEEEHAWW, you still write. And you're still stupendous at it. Every time I do my semi-annual login to DP, I hope and hope to see something from you and it's amazing when I do :) This is so beautiful. Your language has become even more stripped-down and evocative than before, I think. The repetitiveness of the last stanza feels like a heartbeat. I've just re-read it like 5 times and I have no plans to stop anytime soon. "
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"Fantastic turn at the end. Thought provoking "
Posted by drasticdaydreams on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"Haunting indeed. There's a deep and singular sadness in these words. Lovely writing though, I liked it very much."
Posted by Unknown on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"I have been waiting a whole year ! It is exciting to see new words from you. Always unusual. Always original. Always a pleasure. Don't stay away so long next time sir."
Posted by Cantara on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"This is so personal and haunting even! Well-written!"
Posted by Unknown on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"man, the last three lines - deep.."
Posted by Unknown on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"This is really good, effectively creating and air of mystery and familiarity at the same time. Great use of imagery! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

"This is haunting, and creatively put together ..a nightmare upon waking that continues to remain..nice pen"
Posted by River Lily on "You are Still Here" by Stranger

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