Comments by All Members
- "Your comments are always my favorite. You always seem to "get it". "
Posted by Dei on "Catharsis. " by Dei
- "the imagery here emotes the meaning... illustrative, well composed, oddly aggressive in subtle ways, the ignoring, the purging.... a love-hate that seems to vie for dominance, maybe.... masochism from the title on. much enjoyed, thanks ms Dei."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Catharsis. " by Dei
- "very well expressed! this is an emotion that is so hard to portray...and you did it so well... this longing, wanting to be free of this need to belong; yet belong no more. if i make sense. :) anyway... most enjoyed."
Posted by natalie on "Catharsis. " by Dei
- "really loved the existential tone, whether on purpose or by accident of this piece. also the metaphor throughout. beautiful parallels of indescribable sentiments to natural phenomena"
Posted by Poe Etiquette on "Catharsis. " by Dei
- "This is so well-written and it makes me feel sad. Being ruined isn't the only way... You can be all of those beautiful things and more to someone that will make you forget that other someone even existed. You can be beautiful somethings, rather than beautiful nothings and be held highly. You could be someone's world. You don't have to be ruined... Great write. Just... Don't let yourself be ruined."
Posted by Dreamless on "Catharsis. " by Dei
- "such beautiful imagery, the way the sunflowers dance, I like the use of brighter Dei, I reminds me of a kind chi. I goes from happy to deep when the smile fades... Ahh you are so tallented."
Posted by Undertaker on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
- "Every line seemed to grab me, I really liked the newton line."
Posted by Alchemist on "Adayr." by Dei
- "Mysterious, yet revealing. The last two lines were A-1 awesome. Well done. Cool. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Adayr." by Dei
- "lol damn youre right. i never remember to read over and spell check. thanks for pointing it out. And yeah, this was really fun. One of those 5 minute poems that sorta writes itself for you. "
Posted by Dei on "Adayr." by Dei
- "Oh I know all about writing poetry for a man that just seems to get you, this seems like fun tribute to him. Only thing I did notice was a typo 'giggeling' should be 'giggling'."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "Adayr." by Dei
- "well crafted!! i too love mountains and nature. there is something liberating in both thought and feel when standing high above it all. "
Posted by natalie on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
- "I love the mountains and to be up so high, a breathtaking place to be, your words express so beautifully, a captivating pen."
Posted by Magdalena on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
- "Abandonment can be the hardest cross of all to bear. Always wondering and never knowing for sure. Suspect he got a better deal? - and now there is no going back. Selfish and self-centered; be glad he's gone."
Posted by dwells on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
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