Comments by All Members
- "utterly perfect, and filled with emotion beyond compare! the third stanza was my favorite out of all.. but this poem defiantly deserves a 10... wow to the both of you... awesome (: "
Posted by Star on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "Second and Third stanza, by far my favorite, You guys wrote beautifully and solid together, I command you to write together more, and fix what inconsistencies lie here in this site, with true meanings and feelings most of us can't put into words as perfect as this"
Posted by Unknown on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "...this is profound. so many scenarios can be conjured up to shed light on the composing of such a malicious farewell letter... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Scent." by Dei
- "A day of Haiku's :) Wonderful work Astra. Amazing little works of art, I say. "
Posted by Symbol on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "Sounds like that one's irretrievably broken probably. Most profoundly postulated and the longing is palpable - and who's to decorate a perceived perversion with descriptive adjectives anyway? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Scent." by Dei
- "beautiful...this kind of poem leaves me with nothing to say. only a feeling that cannot be described, but captured here. "
Posted by iceshot11 on "Scent." by Dei
- "A lonely piece Astra, bleeding words of beauty. Well done. "
Posted by Symbol on "Scent." by Dei
- "Sounds like a bad way to go, but at least you got the diamond! Cheers AD."
Posted by dwells on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "I could feel this spiralling down, from the universe, to nature, to the personal. Congratulations on a fine and noble effort, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Phi." by Dei
- "well developed tropes... becoming the rood of the savior, very nice; the message itself, the tribute as it were, is as intense as the one to whom it was written. I think there is a 'bath' that should be 'bathe' in there :) but I enjoyed this free verse, the way your mind chose to reveal its inner desires, the yearnings and apprehensions, such admiration, reverence, and yet something more visceral and animalistic seems to shimmer just below the surface... well composed, thank you. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "An Effort At Prose" by Dei
- "Hardly an affront and hoping he feels the same way too, cheers and some wonderful imaginings!"
Posted by dwells on "An Effort At Prose" by Dei
- "well done! loved the pattern you created...almost like a cyclone. i am awed. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Phi." by Dei
- "those inexperienced hands.... hmmm fumbling their way through this helix... emphasis on 'hel'.... nicely woven tale of such wondrous ways of being. clasping strangers, optimism never sounded so sensual. thanks, ms dei"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Phi." by Dei
- "...this is fun to read. a very entertaining way to present such depth..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Phi." by Dei
- "Enjoyed this very much! You have a wonderful way with words. Thank you for another excellent write!"
Posted by Dreamless on "Phi." by Dei
- "something so ethereal about this piece, so captivating, thoroughly enjoyed this!"
Posted by Northstar on "Phi." by Dei
- "very atmospheric, moody piece. supple imagery. well vocalized existentialism. I dig it."
Posted by Unknown on "Phi." by Dei
- "Piece... That speechless I forgot a word >.>"
Posted by Strataic on "Phi." by Dei
- "Wow, Such a beautiful in words and format kind of breathless ... Excellent pen :)"
Posted by Strataic on "Phi." by Dei
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