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- ""things do not get better, but worse" to quote gorey... oh gothic.... ::hug:: what do you do when the light that lit your way is burning down everything you knew?... i feel for you, quite a bit."
Posted by KittyStryker on "Getting Better" by GothicBlack
- "i know what you mean. i have tried to stop cutting for the longest time... but i can't. i haven't cut in a long time... but everyonce in a while there is that release that needs to be felt.
so indeed i know how you feel.
+ DeathFaree +"
Posted by Unknown on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "oh god ouch....you know it's one thing when words paint a picture in your mind but it's another when they just reach out and grab your heart and twist it around like it was a stress ball. Excellent piece lady"
Posted by Unknown on "I Just Don’t Want To Miss You" by GothicBlack
- "That was excellent. The lack of rhyme in each stanza added to the emotion of the poem. Had it rhymed I feel it might have come off as childish. I think I'm gonna go read it again..."
Posted by Unknown on "I Just Don’t Want To Miss You" by GothicBlack
- "You expressed your emotions in such a way that I felt them...under the circumstances...it's still a great write...~Delilah~"
Posted by Delilah on "Lead Tears" by GothicBlack
- "hmm... well you know what? fuck you. That's fine you didn't like it, but like what Jue Hu said, constructive critique is helpful, you how ever are not. Oh and thanks Jue Hu, your completely right. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "Lead Tears" by GothicBlack
- "Im sure you can do better then to just claim something crap. If you are going to comment then you should go all the way, and explain exactly what you mean. Im sure we all try to learn, so even constructive critique can help. This is not. ¦Ñªê "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Lead Tears" by GothicBlack
- "A very frustrating read. It is too long for me becouse I get lost in the emotions. I like it, but as I relate to each word, it kind of gets me frustrated. You express yourself well. But im lost, and feel more so now. ¦Ñªê
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Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Lead Tears" by GothicBlack
- "This just spills emotion into every phrase, into every word . . somehow I find myself knowing what it is to wait what seems an interminable wait. Wonderful write . . you express yourself in such an amazing way."
Posted by cre on "Lead Tears" by GothicBlack
- "I know EXACTLY the feeling you portrayed here. It's been a few months since I've cut, but that doesn't mean I don't crave it. I love your poems.. Excellent work. "
Posted by Bluegirl on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "oh, you don't know how beautiful i think this is...this is EXACTLY how i feel...exactly...thank you for sharing this, it's beautiful. *RAVEN.*"
Posted by Silent_Raven on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "I also remember this part of my life, that I certianly spend time reminiscing of that time...ahh those were the days.. really great write. - Lee ^_^"
Posted by Nightmare on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "nice write, i remember this part of my life and im jus glad that i found the strength to move on, the scary part is will i go back if the person i so rely on abandons me... *~*aNDReW*~*"
Posted by _Andrew_ on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "oh how well i can relate to this, it is unbareable the craveings that comes with it, no one can truely understand unless you have been thur it..very well done.."
Posted by Forever Cold on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "i loved it! i'd have to say this is one of my favorite's of your works. it descibes my life down to a T. my works aren't posted yet but check them out when they come. hope you like them and keep up the good work yourself!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fear Of . . ." by GothicBlack
- "you are still beautiful, as is this poem. i loved it, you put into words what i never could. you are very talented. keep up the good work."
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "i know this was written ages ago,but i just had to comment.This is a fantastic poem,it describes exactly how i feel about myself at the moment.This bought tears to my eyes.Thank you,Butterfly..xxx..."
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
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