I Just Don’t Want To Miss You
By GothicBlack
Left to wash away
All the pain in my eyes
Face, pure torture
And all that I wont
Is that simple feeling
Of your hands upon my skin
I'd give up everything
Just to touch you
Yet your the farthest
That you possibly could be
I just don’t want to miss you tonight
I don’t want to be seen
By the light of day
Nothing seems right
I don’t want to
Rise from my bed
Into another cold morning
Without you by my side
I don’t think the world is caring
That I can't stand without crying
I just don't want to miss you tonight
When nothing is real
And reality has hit the floor
I want to fall into your arms for safety
But they're the farthest away they could be
Can I just run away?
To wake up by your side
Can't we just be happy?
I'm frozen in spot
Unable to bare
With the feelings inside
I just don't want to miss you tonight. . . . . . . .
No sleep can I find
Because of the heartache
And our bittersweet love
I just can't stand to miss you
I just don’t want to miss you tonight. . . . . . . .
Comments on "I Just Don’t Want To Miss You"
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A former member wrote:
Sweet dark humanity.
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
beautiful. This read my soul out loud. -Kitty
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On Monday, July 25, 2005, peril_notion
(87) wrote:
So true are the feelings of apprehensive longing. You've expressed it perfectly and touched my heart in the process. ~Heather
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A former member wrote:
Lovely...very nice...sad but nice
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On Monday, January 17, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
i like this alot.
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A former member wrote:
so good. im speechless.
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Guttercat
(30) wrote:
Beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
oh god ouch....you know it's one thing when words paint a picture in your mind but it's another when they just reach out and grab your heart and twist it around like it was a stress ball. Excellent piece lady
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A former member wrote:
That was excellent. The lack of rhyme in each stanza added to the emotion of the poem. Had it rhymed I feel it might have come off as childish. I think I'm gonna go read it again...
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A former member wrote:
And to add to the first comment...damn do I relate at the moment.
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On Friday, November 7, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
shit that was good. i have tears in my eyes. the questions in the second to last verse worked really well. excellent work.
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
actually I find this really good...kinda the same frame of mind I am in...