Comments by All Members
- "The absolute chaos and rage in this was astounding. I've worked with people who behave this way professionally rather than with your home family and it is absolutely sickening. Everyone is a stepping stone to the goal that can't be reached for people like this because they always move the goal post and are never satisfied with their wake of destruction. As for the structure of the poem itself your rhyme scheme was great and kept the flow going from start to finish. Very well written format and content wise. Awesome job!"
Posted by Dilated View on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "Fucking bravo !!! Most excellent JD....good to know that others have met the Jezebels !!! One of my works due out first part of the upcoming year in my book titled, Book Of All Shadows... And these are the spirits we absloutly love to erase... Wink.. Again, great write !!!!"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "We just admire the living hell out of all of you our brother!! Take no fucking shit from no mother fucker ! We here in this beautiful darkness understand, and have your back ! And this is just for Dave, and all our adversaries, weather a guest at our home, or a thousand miles away, they would do well to always keep both eyes open... For who can escape us that ride the silver cord..... Awesome write brother....HIC sumus...."
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave
- "There is no such thing as true 'right or wrong'. Only weak and strong, dom and sub. Our friend was weak and used by the strong but over time he became stronger then the one who used him. I am happy for him. I am happy he got what he wanted, the revenge he felt he needed to realize his own inner power. But i celebrate the sinister. I celebrate his actions not because he 'righted a wrong' but becuse he became something more the day he enacted his "punishment". He is no victim. He is a powerful force. A judge. A executioner"
Posted by Michael J Smith on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "Did you or the character like the act of killing? Was it enjoyable or just something that had to be done? I mean are you the Dexter of pedos or just a one time revenge seeker? Just curious."
Posted by Michael J Smith on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "She will reap the consequences of her actions one way or another. A tremendously well written poem, I can feel the fire in these words."
Posted by Divine hell on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "disturbingly good! this was so personal it felt like an invasion of your privacy with each word read. best of luck to you!
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Posted by natalie on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "This is so so sad. I don't blame him (you?) I wish I had at least hurt my abusers. They should pay terribly for what they have done...justice. Excellent ink"
Posted by Unknown on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "This is absolutely fucking amazing. You managed to make such a complex thing so easy to understand. I relate to multiple personalities although I am only made up of 2...this must be agonisingly hard to control. Excellent ink"
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave
- "I know people who have lived their whole lives in shame and kept these things very secret... I applaud your readiness and openess to share this with others. Its a really big step in healing."
Posted by Cantara on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
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