Comments by All Members
- "I used to believe that death was calm and peaceful, and far better than being alone. I like stumbling across pieces like this, mainly because, I kinda like the salt to the opened wound remembrance... It proves my strong mental growth. Your words are haunting, and yet comforting to my pulsating heart. You've reminded me, in stanzas, of my once true love. I have to believe, somethings are just 'not' meant to be. ...and move on. My heart still aches, dammit. Great read! -Bows to you and writing on"
Posted by soul_versing on "Into Death's Arms" by SirEnders
- "Putting every last bit of emotion and still being so concise and full of imagination I had to rate this at the highest level. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "As I Kneel To Death" by SirEnders
- "Thank you. I'm glad my writings speak to your emotions. I'm sorry for anything negative I brought up. Again, thank you. "
Posted by SirEnders on "Tainted Moonlight" by SirEnders
- "I went to a little of everything, self harm mainly, even though it's also a sexual thrill. Girls don't realize that men are much more fragile then we tend to let them see."
Posted by SirEnders on "Into Death's Arms" by SirEnders
- "Suicide love poem. In feburary no less. I had a buddy kill himself over some girl that didnt want him. They found him hanging from a football goal post. Headphones in. Kid cidi somg "the prayer" stuck on repeat. Me? I just turned to drugs. Neither path was a solution. Both girls are Still around, goin about their daily business like they didnt destroy a life"
Posted by Unknown on "Into Death's Arms" by SirEnders
- "I have to admit, the syntax put me off for the first few lines, but after that it fell into a rhythm that was almost lulling. As if ushering me along, that was a rather cool feeling with this write. It felt almost like helplessly following the narrative, as the words sucked me in. I'm very glad I finished this, because in the end the beginning slid right into place. Thank you."
Posted by Lab Rat on "Asphyxiational Pain" by SirEnders
- "I am happy that you are dwelling in my poetry. Makes me feel wonderful. Read on, and please if you have any suggestions, message me. "
Posted by SirEnders on "Strongly Fragile" by SirEnders
- "Wow you've brought back memories here for me. And certainly a few tears, reminds me of when I had once given up and tried to take my life in a similar way. I will proceed to read your poems the give me great sanctuary "
Posted by Unknown on "Strongly Fragile" by SirEnders
- "This poem is beautiful you have captured true emotion within this piece. I feel a very deep connection with your writing. Keep up the good work "
Posted by Unknown on "I Welcome Death" by SirEnders
- "This is longer than my other ones. But thank you, it means a lot. It helps to write and this is one of my more emotional ones. So again, thank you. "
Posted by SirEnders on "I Welcome Death" by SirEnders
- "this was very long, but you carried a word flow all the way through to the end..leaving me rather impressed..I sad tale you told..heart wrenching and powerful. greatly enjoyed"
Posted by River Lily on "I Welcome Death" by SirEnders
- "I keep re-reading this, I like your choice of words and I can identify with it very much (well except the tasty snack - I'll pass on that! :-P )"
Posted by TheSadElf on "Every Now And Again" by SirEnders
- "you remind me of this girl i used to know. her obsession with death became a way of life. i really like this write too."
Posted by Nixx on "Love Is An Evil Thing" by SirEnders
- "very well used rhyme, and thank you for posting. it felt like i was there, feeling the pain and sadness. sorry you felt like this enough to write, but always good to write how you feel. very good job 10/10"
Posted by Livingdeadgirl on "She Left" by SirEnders
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