Comments by All Members
- "I love this Shawn! It's beautiful! hmmm *wonders with Danny* who is this for? Must be someone special... It's very nicely done! I like the flow... *huggles* -JiNx(ie)"
Posted by JiNx on "The Girl with the Broken Smile" by Draven
- "aah, ich wunsche mein Deutsch war besser. (can't figure out how to get the umlaut working, either...!) The English version rhymes but the German doesn't - I'm curious; which did you write first? I like the fifth couplet best in the English version, and th"
Posted by purr_verse on "Beschissenes Leben(Shitty Life)" by Draven
- "awesome, such a feeling of... i dont know what... a feeling of admiration perhaps? =)"
Posted by Rone4611 on "Tin Soldier" by Draven
- ""There can only be One", too bad that but hey it made a hell of a poem!"
Posted by Storm on "Loss" by Draven
- "this was wonderfully done...and i will not get into the despair thing....;)"
Posted by Zhee on "Loss" by Draven
- "Well I like it! It’s great I love you rhyme scheme! Beautifully written!"
Posted by Unknown on "Loss" by Draven
- "Nice poem, I like the ryhme scheme, it holds me bound. But you spelt dispair "dispare" haha."
Posted by Unknown on "Loss" by Draven
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