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Loss
By Draven
Why do we hold things near?
when we know they are only going to dissappear
this world is full of false pretences
numbing all of our senses
The agony of loss is too much to bear
if only we could find someone to share
the pain of regret is all to simular
as if we could go so far
to find love again
and take away the pain
is something that cannot be done
because we are forever destined to be one
alone with no one there
all alone with our dispare
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Copyright 2004 Draven
Published on Sunday, November 28, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2007, Dark_Specter
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wrote:
YESSUM
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A former member wrote:
beautifully painful write. And nobody is destined to be alone we all have our soul mate some where out there dont give up someone will come along and show you differently.
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
I love this. It speaks so loudly to me. Great work!
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
"There can only be One", too bad that but hey it made a hell of a poem!
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was wonderfully done...and i will not get into the despair thing....;)
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, Draven
(45) wrote:
Thanks Zhee
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A former member wrote:
Well I like it! It’s great I love you rhyme scheme! Beautifully written!
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A former member wrote:
Nice poem, I like the ryhme scheme, it holds me bound. But you spelt dispair "dispare" haha.
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A former member wrote:
and you spelt despair, dispair :)
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A former member wrote:
HA HA HA! that's cool
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Draven
(45) wrote:
awsome
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
muahaha...
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Draven
(45) wrote:
close enough
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