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to her, may she rest in peace
By Draven
eyes are the gateway to ones soul and i am no different
although my soul is not a happy one like others around me
it used to be three months ago before she left me
i used to be a much happier person but now since she left me
i am nothing but a little child who needs someone to love me as much as
she did
but alas no one can fill that empty spot, that spot that is deep down in
my heart and soul
some still see me as that happy person, so i veil my eyes so they dont
think otherwise
one day soon, i hope, someone will show me the love she showed me
until then rest in peace grandma
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Copyright 2004 Draven
Published on Friday, November 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "to her, may she rest in peace"
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A former member wrote:
lovely write.
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Dark_Specter
(14)
wrote:
very well written, and i hope you find happines again someday. and i know you will. DS
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
heartbreaking and well written.
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
i think most people who have replied got the impresion that this was a girl you were in love with, not your grandma. i know i did at first. something to remember: death, though awefully painful, is one of the beauties of exsistence. she'll always live in
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
in your heart.... very nice write... sorry about your loss. ^Autumn^
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
painful.. you said this beautifully! and i hope you do find someone who will love you as much....
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
someday you will find someone who loves you just as much if not more. someday.
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A former member wrote:
I like it! It made me cry....
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