Seeing But Not Seen

By Draven

running around in the shadows
cloaked by the magick that surrounds me
poison drips from my blades

seein but not seen

looking out of the darkness i see you there
you cant see the assassin that i am
poison drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

silently i move behind you
only a little prick will do
poison drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

closer still i creep
not a sound made by my feet
poison drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

right behind you i stand
my dagger in my right hand
poison drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

a swift movent is all i make
a little prick on you neck
poison no longer drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

you think nothing of it
"just a scratch" you say
poison no longer drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

you fall from the serium
pain wracks your body, organs burst
poison no longer drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

i watch your pain in the night air
so much joi i get
poison no longer drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

slowly your breath stops
i can see that death consumed you
poison no longer drips from my blades

seeing but not seen

now im off towards my next victem
i splash more poison on my daggers
poison drips from my blades

seeing but not seen...

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Copyright 2004 Draven
Published on Tuesday, November 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this has a great flow!

  • sIo On Monday, November 22, 2004, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    this has to be my favorite of all of your poetry....

  • Zhee On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this gave me the creeps! absolutely chilling!

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