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From Across the Room(I see a beautiful girl)
By Draven
From across the room I see a beauty
just staring at the wall
her radiance amazes me
and I can't stop staring
Its as if the goddess Aphrodite
sent her to this desolite town
to show me what true beauty is
I wish to speak to her
and let her know how i feel
but everytime I get around her
I'm utterly speechless
and no words seem to form
no matter how hard I try
I guess I'm just destined only to be
forever watching from across the room
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Copyright 2005 Draven
Published on Sunday, February 13, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, October 4, 2007, Rone4611
(121)
wrote:
act confident. even if you're not. thats all that's truely required to get girls. no offence, because allusions are awesome - but i'm so so so so so sick of mythological references. but that's just me. good write
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
heart wrenching is right indeed. lovely write
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
awww...this is simply sweet as hell..i loved it!
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A former member wrote:
that was beautiful heart wrenching and heart felt.
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