The Girl with the Broken Smile
By Draven
Verse
I see this girl walking all alone
down all the empty back roads
does she do this because she is afraid
is there a reason for her pain
Chorus
The girl with the broken smile
shes gone through so many trials
if I could only take away her pain
and be the one that she could love
Verse
I walk past her house everyday
peering through the window
I see her dad yelling at her mom
and shes still smiling with tears in her eyes
Chorus
The girl with the broken smile
shes gone through so many trials
if I could only take away her pain
and teach her to love again
Verse
It kills me to see such a beauty in pain
walking alone in the midwinters rain
a darkness surrounds this poor defenseless girl
it must be hard thinking that your all alone in this world
Chorus
The girl with the broken smile
shes gone through so many trials
if I could only take away her pain
show her that somebody will love her again
Awards
Comments on "The Girl with the Broken Smile"
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A former member wrote:
i dont know what it is about this but it is just plain AWESOME. the depth of it is captivating.
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
awwww... thats so sweet
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On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
aww this was really heart felt. can't wait to hear what it sounds like with the music :) awesome write
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A former member wrote:
very touching indeed. Every word in it's place... just where it should be. Beautiful.
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
I love this Shawn! It's beautiful! hmmm *wonders with Danny* who is this for? Must be someone special... It's very nicely done! I like the flow... *huggles* -JiNx(ie)
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
aw...Ilove this one shawn!It's really good.whos this for?-Danielle