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- "act confident. even if you're not.
thats all that's truely required to get girls.
no offence, because allusions are awesome - but i'm so so so so so sick of mythological references. but that's just me.
good write
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Posted by Rone4611 on "From Across the Room(I see a beautiful girl)" by Draven
- ""I am filled with sorrow for those I could not protect." ... "I am wracked with the ruin that I have seen." ... this is a very profound and meaningful write, especially to me. I love this work. This one is going on my favs list! "
Posted by Chimauron on "Tin Soldier" by Draven
- "great poem as always you never seem to let me down. i look for something great and you give it."
Posted by Unknown on "my sorrow" by Draven
- "beautifully painful write. And nobody is destined to be alone we all have our soul mate some where out there dont give up someone will come along and show you differently."
Posted by Unknown on "Loss" by Draven
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