Comments by All Members
- "The Lord of Hosts....each of us is a Host. Jesus is a key example of dedication and resolve to unify segmented classes in society. Best to follow him, rather than tell those who dont follow 21st century doctrine that they are going to Hell. Jesus was clearly an alchemist, without question when you read what he spoke to the masses."
Posted by Unknown on "The Passion of the Holy Mother" by rwb35
- "This was very nicely penned ..Funny though I was sitting here reading and the music to pink floyds mother was playing in my head as I read along ..beautiful write and perfect for this time of year"
Posted by River Lily on "The Passion of the Holy Mother" by rwb35
- ""A blind fool in the ever going charade
Champion to the despised, the lost, the depraved
How I stood unrepentant and unbowed" - I know I have been there before! I could relate to this piece. Ciao, T/S
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Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Beyond the Veil" by rwb35
- "I've read the 3 poems and I am extremely impressed- but more then impressed, delighted at the use of your language. It's very much Shakespeare meet Poe but clearly not plagiarism . I'm glad you posted these works. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Last Laugh: Part IV" by rwb35
- "I almost didn't want to read this , knowing how grim things seem . I'm not surprised 'God' has given up on folks , they never follow his commandments then wonder why we're all headed for hell in a handbasket... thank you for your thoughts :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "A Treatise on the State of the World" by rwb35
- "When I read I always try to pick it apart get a feel for it try to relate then comment..this has a war type feeling maybe i'm getting that out of it because of everything happening in paris or perhaps thats what you were going for either way nicely penned as always."
Posted by River Lily on "Psalm of the Damned" by rwb35
- "I get a nice mental image of a wicked thunderstorm. The silence at the end I am not sure if that is a welcomed change from the emotional roller coaster or an unwanted repeating bit of bore life keeps throwing at you. "
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled #16" by rwb35
- "You made my heart briefly ache, a tiresome weary mind looking for refuge to weather the storm with your "ghost of a smile." I no longer focus my train of thought on those inner demons because they sucked the very life from the core of my body. I hated tossing and turning all night in bed, never resting, only to wake up drained to face it all over again. The never ending cycle, it'll either make you or brake you. Great piece! -Bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "Untitled #26" by rwb35
- "You are so quickly becoming my favourite new poet. The flow is always on point with the message and imagery in your pieces and that is no easy accomplishment. I particularly love the first three lines in this...it grabs you by the throat quickly and then presses you close for the rest of the piece...like a pleading, gritted teeth confession just in the reader's ear where no one else can hear it."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Untitled #16" by rwb35
- "I feel such a heavy heart weaving these words and a desperate longing spilling out between the lines. I know, all too well, the mourning of who you were colliding with who you are to be. From lips of satin to an open grave, your imagery pulled me into this journey with you. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Untitled #34" by rwb35
- "Glad that you enjoyed. I unfortunately have no musical talent. If you know of anyone, let me know."
Posted by rwb35 on "Oblivion" by rwb35
- "This is one of the most eloquent pieces of writing I've ever seen. I hope one day to achieve this level in my poetry. xx"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled #17" by rwb35
- "Amazing lyrics..you should if you havent already put some of this to music.."
Posted by River Lily on "Oblivion" by rwb35
- ""still i go on pretending not to give a damn while the years and distance take their toll" - i can definitely feel those lines. great piece! i like the style, with the format working to make me think of years flowing past, in waves. great work! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Untitled #31" by rwb35
- "I love this. I love the imagery and I love how this pulled me in by the first few lines. Keep at this, please?! "
Posted by Star on "Palmistry (Unfinished)" by rwb35
- "I rather enjoyed this. This was put together cleverly, I like the bits of rhyme, I like the bits that sort of jumble together until the words fit a pattern. I'm not one for wishy washy soulmate stuff, because I've been hurt by said stuff, but this.... This bears hope and truths. Well done."
Posted by Lux on "Missive to a love that's far away" by rwb35
- "I am a fan and a lover of the worlds that poetic stories tell, especially those with fantasy and sci-fi and horror elements as this. I was lost in this and could only hmph when it came to an end. The imagery is so rich and heavy and encompassing. You must get back to this. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Palmistry (Unfinished)" by rwb35
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