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  • "Fuck me sideways that was good! From the title right through. I loved the pace it took up in the middle because of the perfect rhyme! It expressed the patience expiration so very well . Wow I wonder if you still write? I shall have to go look. :-) "
    Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
  • "I love the ending and the line about only being able to pick one choice. You have real talent, keep it up!"
    Posted by BrideToAgony on "If" by lordshadow
  • "what a truly sad tale. this is something that is both difficult and painful and you did a great job of capturing it here. thanks for sharing."
    Posted by natalie on "The Wedding Video" by lordshadow
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