I Fucking Hate You
By lordshadow
I'm calling in reference
to the pain I ingested
the shit you injected
while you left me neglected
dispensed with/dejected
opened wide, unprotected
the shit you perpetrated
that I masticated
while you masturbated
while well-lubricated
by the tears of self-hatred
your ego inflated
your eyes dilated
by this drug you created...
and I just thought you should know
that when it's your time to go...
as life slips from you ever
so
s l o w...
I will love every fucking minute of it
And I'm going to watch the life drain from your body...
And as it does, I'll hope
that in those last precious moments
you saw things a little clearer
All these things cross my mind...
as I stare in the mirror.
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© 2006 lordshadow
Published on Wednesday, May 3, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "I Fucking Hate You"
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A former member wrote:
Great rhyme and rage, the last two stanzas blew my mind! Was not expecting that
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A former member wrote:
reminds me of my poem fucking hate people like you. nicely written. full of rage. my kind of style.
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
sweet write - force and flow were flawless - excellent once again :)
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
Just wanted to thank you all for the comments.
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
..i know im wrong but this reminded me of my marriage..hmm...every time i read you im blown away by the emotion and power behind your words and you just keep getting better, much respect ~kristy
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Jaded Ireland
(26) wrote:
damn... that's all I can say
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A former member wrote:
GOD DAMN!!!...good work, i like
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...words can't expres the sound I just made...
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Cattarax
(210) wrote:
how feelings play mind games more then any thing else ... nice read ... I love the first paragraph the most