Comments by All Members
- "Beautiful. The moon is a very versatile image. It is refreshing to see something original done with it. Bravo!"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- ""there is no more water in the sea" is one of the most evocative expressions of emptiness i've ever read... anywhere. this is great"
Posted by Unknown on "Did you know...?" by diavolessa
- "seems to me a necessary evil, somthing you must do, for a desired end.....none the less a beautiful and articulate poem,well done............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "She" by diavolessa
- "these questions of the night.the intricate way in which you lay them.
well done my friend...................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- ""and the corpse of my poetry," this could be Vivaldi's lost season. Mid-Autumn. tragic and beautiful..."
Posted by Unknown on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- "wow,the things you see;and the words you write to feel,are so very sharp and unsure,definitely draws one in......your sight and inwardness..........well done..........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Crying for myself..." by diavolessa
- "I can relate to this very well...daring not to hold on to the memory and hope...but needing the recollection and possibility for warmth. Very good piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Did you know...?" by diavolessa
- "I like the flow and imagry of this one - my favourite lines are "“A ticket, please for the first train,”
for the one that parts with dreams
when the sun opens his unwashed eyes". Very nice!"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "A ticket, please..." by diavolessa
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