Comments by All Members
- "This was so sweet. . . You're confused by the love, and afraid of what it might mean. . .thats so beautiful. Write on:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "TO LOVE AGAIN" by MABUS
- "This is an awesome write MABUS. Glad you are still on DP. Cant wait to read more new stuff. I have been back here for a few weeks now after 4 yrs and puttin all new stuff up as well."
Posted by Unknown on "The Ancient Dance" by MABUS
- "I Love this Piece. A prophecy to look forward to. A dream a page away from manifesting again. Beautiful the feeling of this ~669~"
Posted by sixsixnine on "The Ancient Dance" by MABUS
- "phew... jeez... that was a head fuck. and you were on what? i wasn't expecting the happy ending. this was wave after wave of ecstatic highs and desperate lows. reminds me of my life!"
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Lifes Many Avenues" by MABUS
- "lying in a pool of blood - sounds like it was extracted from experience.hard hitting weighty effort.Well done - Col."
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "Sacrifice" by MABUS
- "this is great..... some really nice couplets in that..... I feel like you could take each one and write a book about them...... awesome write."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Ignorance is Bliss" by MABUS
- "damn your good...epic accuracy in this.....I think it's hard for most people to abandon there pride and realize they need to take control of there own mind, I know I stuggle sometimes....this should be a mandatory read:)elisa"
Posted by elisa on "Ignorance is Bliss" by MABUS
- "i dont' try to really follow and set structure when i write...i pretty much just write it all out as a release at the end of the day
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Posted by MABUS on "Ignorance is Bliss" by MABUS
- "i think you attempted some type of structure, but you didn't really follow it through out. other than that, i really like the content, and totally agree. ^Autumn^"
Posted by A Broken Soul on "Ignorance is Bliss" by MABUS
- "This was very clever. a few words misspelled. but other than that it was marvolous. "
Posted by Dei on "Martyr" by MABUS
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