FEELINGS

By MABUS

Roses are red
Violets are blue
My only thought
Is of the gunshot wound

Shrouded in darkness
Agony of light
Burning of the eyes

Memories fo passt
Leaking through
Sweet memories
Of your gunshot wound

Straight to the heart
Ripping of the skin
Burning from the pain

Blinded by love
Fooled by hope
Cast aside by fate

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Copyright 2004 MABUS
Published on Sunday, September 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • muckraker On Monday, July 11, 2005, muckraker (14)By person wrote:

    can't you make it more graphic?!

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