Comments by All Members
- "All of this is...is I just don't know what to say...I don't have words for this, but don't get my wording wrong, this is a great one I just don't know what to say to help I feel that you've gotten it..that touch of power to make the words speak to people, It sure has me!! Keep it up!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Always the Sister Always the Friend " by WinglessFaith
- "The third and forth line were definite favorites for me. A shadow and beneath you I float are such powerful words and really stick out among the rest. All in all, a really good read. "
Posted by JayVerael on "Untitled" by WinglessFaith
- ""hope and love her greatest doubt" is the line that really stood out to me in this poem, an honest reflection of how positive emotions are warped by the mind's traitorous filters...aiding the damage. keep writing! :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled " by WinglessFaith
- "Wonderful ending, dark and well written. The rhyming is a little too noticeable in my opinion but other than that well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "Sadistic Self" by WinglessFaith
- "I can relate to this, sadly. :/ Its so simple to overlook pain, and when it becomes to much, even easier to say 'we had no idea'."
Posted by Unknown on "Smile " by WinglessFaith
- "This poem is so relatable on so many levels. I really like it. Short but to the point and very infeuential. It's nice to know there's people out there who feel the same as you who are able to read and comment without needless critisism. I look forward to your next poem. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Smile " by WinglessFaith
- "I really really liked this. And I don't agree with it being a disguise, more less that beauty is in fact only skin deep and you want this person to see who you truly are. Gj here"
Posted by Unknown on "Beneath the Beauty" by WinglessFaith
- ""She must be called by some other name" - I absolutely love that line, such an amazing ending. I'm always so curious about rebirth and spiritual energy. I like to hope that we'll all be able to somehow communicate with the ones we love from earth in the next life. Not sure if that makes sense haha Anyways, really enjoyed this. "
Posted by Unknown on "Birth of Brook" by WinglessFaith
- "As I've said before, I didn't want to think you were doing this. I hope all is well now, well for at least one of us anyway. And as always, beautiful poems! And I'll still hold everything you've written down if you want me too. *hugs*"
Posted by Pride Ed on "Somber Sunday" by WinglessFaith
- "Never is a long time WF, but then again too we all have different needs and drives. Don't you just adore being expected to comply to the norm; it never stops. Hoping your heart eventually softens - it's all up to you (but then you already know that too). Be well and thanks for the dour insights in verse. Some people are goosey and just need their space."
Posted by dwells on "Numb to Love" by WinglessFaith
- "truth. beautifully versed but not an iota of insincerity thanks for a peek inside. good luck! :D "you should always smile, it confuses the hell out of people" - Decoy 2014"
Posted by Unknown on "Love Me Not" by WinglessFaith
- "You have my respect. I know how pain is only a feeling and when all feeling seems "dead", its all one has. mine was simply taken out on others. I hope you can find a way to feel more than pain, I hope that for us both. "
Posted by Unknown on "Somber Sunday" by WinglessFaith
- "Sheesh WF - how lonely and lost this sounds. It just kept sinking lower in the hopelessness. Very well written if that is any consolation and hopefully cathartic too - your parents still want you I'm quite sure."
Posted by dwells on "No Rhyme or Reason" by WinglessFaith
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