Sadistic Self

By WinglessFaith

Written 03/23/15

And if I end her life
With a scissors or a knife
I'll feel no shame
As I will have finally ended her rein
Cascading red
She refused to go to bed
Sleep now child
The pain will be mild
This is what's meant to beĀ 
Now ends you and begins me
My breath you conceal
I am evil I am real
We stand apart
But share the same heart
Silent is the night
As I pull her aside to make her right
Flowing from the deep
Watch now don't weep
Vision fading
This moment so elating
Now finished and gone
I only sorry it took me so long

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Copyright 2015 WinglessFaith
Published on Monday, March 23, 2015.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • FireAsylum On Sunday, June 21, 2015, FireAsylum (19)By person wrote:

    "now ends you and begins me", I really like that line. Good job with th ending. And the overall work of course!

  • A former member wrote: I like the rhyme of it, it adds to the multiple self insanity tone... I relate and so do I.

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful ending, dark and well written. The rhyming is a little too noticeable in my opinion but other than that well done.

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