Comments by All Members
- "You are very strong-willed to not let that person back in your life with what seems to me that you felt so deeply. Keep going; it's hard, but worth it. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Death of a romance" by Jennanselmo
- "Had its ups and down moments through....but in the end at least there seems to be a glimmer of positivity..welcome to do...and thanks for sharing!"
Posted by natalie on "against the tide" by Jennanselmo
- "Wow there is so much here to touch on. So many different aspects all rolled up into one, its nice to see it in words rather than just feeling it. For me at least, writing it and seeing helps me better understand it all. Just keep your head up (cliche I know) work on understanding yourself so that you can eventually work on changing the things in your life that need to be changed. And then you can work on your relationship with others."
Posted by Unknown on "against the tide" by Jennanselmo
- "The fall and the rise. Learn to love your pyre, because fire destructs and constructs. I went through a similar situation and believe me, despite the first terrible months of despair, you'll come to understand that you can walk the world alone and that life is beautiful once you decide what to do with it."
Posted by Nimue44 on "We all Deserve a lot better" by Jennanselmo
- "Wow.. This piece is very deep and sad.. I can relate to many things you expressed with your words.. I feel myself most the time like a nobody too.. No hopes, no dreams, just like a biological existence without sense.. But there are days too when the light seems to shine and I feel that there's maybe something for me here.. What I'm trying to say is that you are not alone in darkness and even in the darkest place you can find a source of light.. I hope you can find it.. Don't give up.. And thank you for sharing this piece.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Loss of Life, Loss of Self" by Jennanselmo
- "Great awareness in this piece, as if you were able to take a step back from your life and describe the.comings and goings.
Its unfortunate the contemplation of suicide is chosen. If you realize you are not a clone, that you are simply pretending to be ordinary, that should be an awakening! A beautiful triumph of individuality, to discover who you were truly meant to be.
Not to mention you have a way with words. Nice write.
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Posted by whisperingwalls on "Loss of Life, Loss of Self" by Jennanselmo
- "Your dissection of emotions lead to realization...leading to strength. An empowering write with a great flow.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "Moving On " by Jennanselmo
- "I love your poetry, its very dark. this one has a great flow to it and the melancholy is never ending. to stop the tears truly brings comfort but finally giving in to the pain. a true surrender. is the ultimate bliss because that's when the healing begins. awesome poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Passionately Empty" by Jennanselmo
- "Your burning pain and anger is really felt in these words. A potent poem that would poison your enemy if these words could be tasted and swallowed. "
Posted by Cantara on "Best Enemy" by Jennanselmo
