Comments by All Members
- "...I've been reading through a lot of your work tonight. Very sad and lonely.... It makes me miss a daughter I lost 13 years ago. It makes me miss a marriage that fell apart 10 years ago.....It's really good work.
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Posted by dreadlox33 on "Little Boy" by Kfritz
- "This sounds like textbook projection... The liar calling you a liar. "
Posted by Cassette on "soon" by Kfritz
- "I here I thought I was the only one who fantasized as an adult. It's an escape and helps me fall asleep. LOL Nice write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Dreaming of another" by Kfritz
- "As others have mentioned, this is highly relatable. I understand those feelings of loneliness and emptiness and suffering with and without love. It's a hard road to travel and I think this poem shows it quite well."
Posted by Unknown on "Near you" by Kfritz
- "I love this piece. while i destroy the reason i loved you in the first place. most dont even realize theyre doing this. Beautiful. -KP"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Control" by Kfritz
- "excellent insight and stark words make for a poem i can get involved with and understand from my own point of view... this brought on memories and reminders of lessons supposedly learned, thank you for an excellent write."
Posted by Jonas on "Control" by Kfritz
- "yeah it is scarey as hell falling in love... and falling couldn't be more right to it. but its how you land that is the most frightening, will you crash... or fall into their arms ... and most scarey , is not feeling love at all. "
Posted by Unknown on "as you sleep" by Kfritz
- "Yeah, when you open up to really love someone, you are putting your heart into their care. They will have the power to nourish or to devastate your spirit. That isn't something to be taken lightly.
Great meaning here, Veingo.
I remember the very instant
when I made that choice years ago
as if it were only moments."
Posted by Scarrzz on "as you sleep" by Kfritz
- "An excellent write. Phenomenal word choice that vibrantly evokes the imagery in the mind."
Posted by Unknown on "MidNight Rain" by Kfritz
- "I'll go ahead and disagree with the thought that it is human nature to dissapoint others in need. That aside, it is unfortunate that you should be subjected to such low energy from people. Your pain is felt, and I do hope it recedes. ~b"
Posted by blue on "disappointment" by Kfritz
- "hmm i feel like a child again.. except the sheets were clean. this held me from rain drop till table top.. well done
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Posted by serotonin lost on "MidNight Rain" by Kfritz
- "holy fuck..that was zapping my breath as the last line feel...suddenly age is open us and memories taunting or haunting continue...for always i guess...Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "To feel you within" by Kfritz
- ""A wine glass in my right hand Filled with your blood And I’ll sip it down As the sun sets Into the hills" absolutely wonderful write. this was just amazing."
Posted by Unknown on "To feel you within" by Kfritz
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