Near you

By Kfritz

You see the traffic driving by
As I pull away from the curve
Sitting behind the wheel of my car
You'll never see me again
I never needed you
even when I thought I did
I was just fooling everyone
mostly myself
Cause even when you come around
I'm still alone in my heart
When I should be held by yours
But I never needed you
Even when you thought I did
Even when you thought
I'd never be able to leave
Cause I couldn't bare the pain of loneliness
But I was suffering through it
just to be near you

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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Tuesday, July 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: As others have mentioned, this is highly relatable. I understand those feelings of loneliness and emptiness and suffering with and without love. It's a hard road to travel and I think this poem shows it quite well.

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Northstar (376)By person wrote:

    wow--this hits a sore spot with me...ouch ouch ouch...I feel ya in this one--nice work

  • A former member wrote: ouch...i've been the guy in this situation once. beautiful write that i feel is provocative from my viewpoint. Well done.

  • Crimson_Angel On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Crimson_Angel (8)By person wrote:

    i was in a relationship like that i can relate to this...awesome writing..

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