clouds falling

By Kfritz

UNFINISHED

sometimes
i feel like
the clouds are falling down,
like water balloons
being thrown
off of roof-tops
onto the streets of new york,
like a depressing,
movie cliche....

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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Tuesday, December 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    ok... where you going with this one?

  • A former member wrote: Very Lovely

  • ShadowFlight On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    This has a very succinct presence... a glimpse of just one instant- like a photograph... it may be unfinished but it is marvelously complete

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