porcelain doll

By Kfritz

Sometimes i feel like
a porcelain doll
transparent nylon hair
painted on lashes
rosey lips

and pale wintery skin
thats starting to crack
underneath
so many
layers of lace..

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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Monday, December 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: so descriptive, and i have to say the image was quite beautiful.

  • StAinedNblood On Monday, December 6, 2004, StAinedNblood (27)By person wrote:

    Awesome, good detail

  • A former member wrote: that was good much enjoyed.

  • AniDayz On Monday, December 6, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    you get right to the point, in a very descriptive way. very good. i can relate. nice job

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