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One last question before we fall asleep
By Kfritz
I know I talk to much
My when my body is restless
And my head filled with thoughts
I know I keep you up
When youre beyond exhuastion
And on the edge of insanity
So I’ll just ask one more question
And then pretend to sleep
Does my insomnia
Give you the urge to hold a pillow
Down tight on my face…
So you can finally get some rest?
Wait I thought of another question…
If you did that…
Would you do it just long enough
So I’ll just pass out
but eventually awake?
You wouldn’t want to kill me
Just to get some sleep?....
Would you?
Okay
so it was 5 more questions
I'll be quiet now
i promise
i really promise
i'm gonna fall asleep now...
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are you sleeping yet?
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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Thursday, July 29, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "One last question before we fall asleep"
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A former member wrote:
oh my god! i just love this..:)
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A former member wrote:
Are you asleep yet? Nice poem.
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A former member wrote:
nice, i liked it. Simple, to the point...it was good. nice job.
-namelez
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296)
wrote:
cute..
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
*smiles* ahhh I sooo know what you are talking about! you have this young, adorable, endearing quality to your works--this one was very well done
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A former member wrote:
sweet. interesting read. i enjoyed it.
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Ulfric
(7) wrote:
Clever :D
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Simply Me
(40) wrote:
Ha! This is cute. I enjoyed reading it.
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