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Dreaming of another
By Kfritz
I close my eyes and see you
the sun is still asleep
The stars gently light your face
our nearly bare bodies
covered in dew
grass under our backs
but its all my imagination, and
when my eyes open
youre alseep
lying there snoring,
wrapped in my blanket
dreaming of another love
so I close my eyes
to pretend its me whos in your head
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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.
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On Saturday, November 25, 2017, Just Dave
(448)
wrote:
I here I thought I was the only one who fantasized as an adult. It's an escape and helps me fall asleep. LOL Nice write. JD
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On Friday, March 4, 2005, Loneal
(86) wrote:
A self-wrought fantasy, forced, needed ... neatly expressed. Good job! ~L (Synthetic Darkness)
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A former member wrote:
Ah, the pain of love! Nice.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
the most sorrow filled gentle pain is the kind that kills us the most....bravo.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
*the sun is still asleep* nice play of words and something that I have pondered before... Bethany
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