Comments by All Members
- "Evoke you do,..the dissolusion of paridgm shift,...when illusion sets in your left with mental anarchy,..i like alot."
Posted by Unknown on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "2 lines from this write will stick with me for quite a long while... "We all want what we desire, but will we retrieve it from the fire?" Blunt wisdom impact... HEAD SHOT!"
Posted by Sketso on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "Ha, just as good the second time. Fine writing here. ~b"
Posted by blue on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "Wrong? Quite right. "Is it making us dream,
of rainbow slides on soft clouds?" Loved that line above all here written. Especially too the lanslide of verbalized emotions ending in such a provocative and literally poignant question: "We all want what we desire,
but will we retrieve it from the fire?" These cut to the bone perspectives may be what we all need these days. This was truly enjoyed, thank you. ~b
"
Posted by blue on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "this was amazing. loved the whole thing! but that stanza that starts, "
I don't want to be paralyzed
unable to recognize " really stuck out for me. wow! just amazing."
Posted by RubyXero on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "Holyhell well done is right! I'd really like to hear this read aloud to see if it matched the natural rhythm it took on as I got deeper into it. This is a really cool write--kudos, really well done. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "Holyhell well done.. I'm not normally a fan of rhyme but you pulled this off perfectly. " The audacity of letting these fuckers lead, When they cannot see you, or me.." Exactly. This is brilliant. ~Lost"
Posted by Unknown on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "Caught in a cross-fire of surreal and reality,..to and fro: all we ever wanted was to 'feel'...a descriptive collage of bits and pieces,...well planned."
Posted by Unknown on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "welly well, I myself do not enjoy rhyme much, but I did like this! Big win for you. Cheers. ~b"
Posted by blue on "worm" by sixsixnine
- "goodness... loved the infinite universe and jupiter lines but the whole was breath stealing... like swimming in a whirlpool yet wanting to just become part of it and let it carry you along... "
Posted by NikesRain on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "oooooohhhhhhh utter euphoria im feeling now.......(scratch that the answer's clear) love this!!!!!!Question existing..........."
Posted by Unknown on "mixing dimensions" by sixsixnine
- "i agree this flowed nicely...i read it fast...i guess that how its suppose to go....came through well..good job"
Posted by Unknown on "iNvIsbLe DoOm" by sixsixnine
- "This had a most phenomenal structure and flow to it. Definitely an experience to read."
Posted by Unknown on "Give In" by sixsixnine
- ""I don't want to be paralyzed
unable to recognize
what lies inside
is all but my
demise "......love these lines they make my soul quiver and agree!"
Posted by LiP Stiches on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "'behold i hole the infinite universe in a microscopic piece of my finger ... bigger still are the dreams that linger raindrops the size of jupiter. evaporate way too late. flooding the milky way ...'
the whole of this is like diving into the belly of a jelly fish. and breathing. and coming out alive."
Posted by AniDayz on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "Self awareness: ironic that when we acknowledge our existence that we can end up more confused than when we lived in the dark, .. nice touch."
Posted by Unknown on "mixing dimensions" by sixsixnine
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