mixing dimensions

By sixsixnine

Come on
Give me someone

I get lonely to

And I just need one of you

This is me not knowing
I am pretending
I need
to be
with
someone
now

My heart
has broken
over
and again
I just want
a really good
friend
to ride
with to the end

Come on
you crazy gods
Help me feel what you feel

Is it possible that non of this
Is real,
but then why do I feel?

am I there or here?
am I far or near?
am I gay or queer? –scratch that (the answer’s clear)
am I everything dear?

Yes I am here
Yes I am there
Omni present

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Published on Thursday, August 21, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "mixing dimensions"

A former member wrote: oooooohhhhhhh utter euphoria im feeling now.......(scratch that the answer's clear) love this!!!!!!Question existing...........
A former member wrote: Self awareness: ironic that when we acknowledge our existence that we can end up more confused than when we lived in the dark, .. nice touch.
On Friday, September 5, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

: ) Cool piece! "This is me not knowing I am pretending"...
On Friday, September 5, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

I just watched a movie called the Signal last night which this fits with perfectly! Ciao, T/S
On Friday, August 29, 2008, LiP Stiches (42) wrote:

what a stellar inter-dimensional roller coaster.....yum
On Friday, August 22, 2008, Narcissa (391) wrote:

I enjoyed the expression in this piece...the flow and the humor just fit in perfectly.
A former member wrote: I liked the way this flowed, jumbled thoughts falling in order. Good stuff.
On Thursday, August 21, 2008, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

thanx elisa and urban. this like all of my work is very spontaneous and it feels good to know that is being enjoyed.
On Thursday, August 21, 2008, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

i felt the reach in this......indeed your words have true emotion.........well done........urban
On Thursday, August 21, 2008, elisa (1595) wrote:

quite the infinite reach. whisper this in any direction and the right person will hear it. nicely done.
On Thursday, August 21, 2008, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

i meant to spell dimension correctly. lol