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worm
By sixsixnine
burn
turn
over the worm
germ
sqirm
time to learm
you
&
Me
we're energy
'til
eternity
fuck comformity
if
we
can't be happy
then
we
just can't be
simply
sober
&
playing
fucked up games
hidden
agenda
breaks me insane
have
to
love the rain
since
it's
all the same
pain
comes
with this frame
blame
me
for
your
shame in vane
here in the spiritual fortress
fuck the cerebreal cortex
burn
squirm
you fucking worm
germs
learn
now it's your turn
*669*
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Copyright 2004 sixsixnine Matthew Parkey II
Published on Monday, August 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2009, blue
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wrote:
welly well, I myself do not enjoy rhyme much, but I did like this! Big win for you. Cheers. ~b
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A former member wrote:
aptly titled. your choice of words, and construction thereof, is excellent. the whole "you say a lot in what little you say" kind of thing.
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A former member wrote:
Hey, Matt! Aren't we all just "waiting for the worms" trying to avoid them anyway? When you write, you give the Grim Reaper the finger & scream "FUCK YOU!" anyways. Keep it up! ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
Hey, Matt! When you wrote this, I was reminded of PINK FLOYD'S "Waiting For The Worms" from 'THE WALL' album. It's just the impression I got. Some of my really short, funny, & messed up poetry is written just like this (smiles) ~Shane~
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
This needs a drumbeat in the background... Almost like a chant. I likes it ;) Especially the shape of the poem.
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, AHHH
(184) wrote:
dude you are awesome
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
thanx scream* glad you enjoyed it ;) *669*
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A former member wrote:
fuck the cerebreal cortex
burn
squirm
you fucking worm
:-) This is Great
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A former member wrote:
heh, this was pretty cool, great stuff.
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
you got some really cool stuff yourself .. i enjoyed it alot velndefined.. *669
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