iNvIsbLe DoOm

By sixsixnine

shrooms ago
it all felt so slow
now i feel it all
as one quick blow
so i fucking let go
this beginning cold as snow
after this shit i don't know*

think life's a loan
we pay off with moans
throwing stones
finding happiness in painform
under trees in mean storms
need to fucking end this norm!
born
torn
mourn
porn
thorns sworn to scourn
inside the woumb
making wounds
deeper gloom
evil fume
slaughter room
wicked noon
iNvIsbLe DoOm
&
i'm so lonely & bored
just gonna fucking ignore
that i'm frustrated &
so much more torn
i'm left on the floor
worse than before
tied by a whore
who's laughing at me as she
steps out the door
can't take anymore
now hate is my core
forever more
WHY!!!
can't hang my woes to drip dry
let the bullshit pass me by
fucking choose to let it slide
but the whores left me to die
&
I'm
burning
freezing
my feelings contradicting
breathing
screaming
my rising just keeps sinking
loving
hating
my life i spend debating
falling
stalling
no god hears me calling

i wish things just changed
be anything but the same
take away the pain
i've dealt with in vain

******6******6*********9

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Published on Friday, May 7, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "iNvIsbLe DoOm"

On Saturday, March 10, 2012, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

t has been a long while since writing this. It is funny and hard to remember the exact way I was feeling, but I can remember writing being a special way of detoxing from much of the toxic non sense I was experiencing. Thanks DP for being a place of release and allowing us all to express and embrace our darkness, and everything. It is fun to look back and see how much change has happened within my mind since. My heart is the same pounding & melting steel. hehe
A former member wrote: i agree this flowed nicely...i read it fast...i guess that how its suppose to go....came through well..good job
A former member wrote: nice, this flowed very well
A former member wrote: Many Many Shrooms ago we used to talk alot. now youve disappeared for the 2nd time ][ ][
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273) wrote:

hah many shrooms ago , maybe this was his invisible doom?
On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

the was like an open wound... amazing work!
On Thursday, October 7, 2004, Angst Queen (370) wrote:

jes told me to have a look at you and i feel bad that i didn't before. your other works are just likly to improve from this point and this one itself impresses me
On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

so completely alive ... barely contained by the skin ... last thing holding you together ... immacculate .." my rising keeps sinking ..." ... no fucking formulaic bullshit ... scream and break the glass ... funguy
On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

nicely done in rhymes...good work
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273) wrote:

yeah definately , good ryhming.
On Thursday, August 5, 2004, TheReap (38) wrote:

Unique style - keep it up!
A former member wrote: yeah ok you beat me on the psychotic factor.. at least im not a druggie-psycho_panda
On Sunday, August 1, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

I heard your cries - and felt your pain
On Sunday, May 30, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

thanx poet & anth it's been over a year since i've been here. thanx for the welcome* talk to you guys later *669*
A former member wrote: such an empty, tortured, isolated feel to "this". it's damn good to have you back, 669.
On Friday, May 7, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

i like your style, it shows promise of more great works to come, the way you form it with flow
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273) wrote:

promise indeed.