Revalation
By sixsixnine
the vision begins with a catastrophic earthquake
the entire earth begins to shake
at such magnatude that it breaks
everyhome & every building fucking crumbling
every emotion love fear & hate all disinagrate
millions dying per second
the beginning of the end
at this moment there's no such thing as good & numb
& specially no place to run
this is the end of fun
the pain of everythings just begun
drowned
burned
&
tortured
corpses everywhere
everything that was living is dead
still there'sno peace, instead our souls are colored red
together as one on a blazing bed connected by a thread
falling melting like candles when turned on
we were hoping by dying the pain would be gone
how fucked up is it when we're wrong
peace, love & unity is now all that we long
suddenly the sting rewinds to the beginning of time
we are for ever a microscopic sighn
of all that's sublime & devine
speaking spirits truth in rhymes
clearing our minds
silencing lies
it changed when we chose to find crime as the prime desighn
now it's too late to wake the love with so much hate
we're being punished for pretending it's ok to be fake
ignorance must cry in this lake, 'til the curse we break
our only fate is to individually create
the key to open up & get out thru hell's gate
when we rise above we become love.....................
Comments on "Revalation"
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A former member wrote:
Wow...You're part hippie...moving.very stirring imagery.Loved it.
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
great work man, some head spinning imagery in this, loved it
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
some guy by the name of Lennon once wrote - "all we need is Love" - you seem to have a grasp on that as well
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On Monday, July 26, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
this vision you set before us is be-set with prophetic truth and the true folly of one and all.....well spoken, truly felt................urban
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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
WOW! I LOVE IT!!! i was thinking twice about reading it and now im glad i did i loved it the whole time im here reading and at the same time going through hell on earth you made me feel as though i was there LOVE IT! ~darlin :)
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On Friday, July 23, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
you know six - I wasn't sure I was going to like this - but - as I read I was roped in and...throughly enjoyed it :)