saturday morning

By sixsixnine

The rythm in your eyes
is synchronized
with the sun rise

The feeling of being
by your side
makes me naturally high

Thank you for this weekend
Thank you for being my friend






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© 2008 sixsixnine
Published on Monday, September 15, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: ahhhhhhhhhh...cute. :P

  • A former member wrote: I love this...so beautiful; a simple moment expressed in simple, yet resounding words.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, September 17, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Excellent commemoration of a preciously held moment in time. Scholar

  • elisa On Monday, September 15, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    Damn... someone has an extremely thoughtful friend. very well said

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