father fucker (this is my revenge)
By sixsixnine
what is your salvation
think you're having complications
i will be your devistation
for all your misenterpritations
think you have me here
do to fear?
think you have me here
to use & abuse?
well as you've seen
fUcK yOu!
father fucking piece of assmoist shit
you've made me so fucking pissed
gonna make you eat my fist
covered in shit & piss
for you i fought my jelous thoughts
but fucking you've eating my heart
i'm better off with what i had
from the start
living with you is
agony
misery
hipocracy
lunacy
father fucker
you want to fuck with my head
father fucker
you're gonna wish you were dead
cuz
i fucking waited with trust
now with disgust
you should've just stopped
but you fucked it all up
now you will pay
for your yesterday
tommorrow will come
but you'll never cum
you may as well stop reading
my plan will leave you greiving
knowing it is deceiving
since i'm cryptic
in my scheeming
you've left me no choice
after all your joy
is to molest little boys
& tell them to stay quiet
my revenge against you
is far worse than any riot
see your mind
begin to unwind
feel so far from sublime
when the truth you will find
is you alive is a crime
father fucker
fuck you
you're out of time
******669******
Comments on "father fucker (this is my revenge)"
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On Monday, October 22, 2012, MESUN
(230) wrote:
Revisiting my favorite works. I hope you have exacted your revenge, and found somewhere inside, a peace. I hope all is well.
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On Monday, June 20, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow!!! Fuck, this is Awsome...
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A former member wrote:
death to the pedofiles!!!!!
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On Friday, December 26, 2008, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
I'm sure I sense a little hostility here :-) I mean what do you say to that but, that's definitely how you stick it to the man.
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A former member wrote:
that gave me goosebumps and remided me of somethin
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A former member wrote:
that was interesting:)
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On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
(59) wrote:
i can really see where you're coming from
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On Thursday, September 15, 2005, MESUN
(230) wrote:
holy shit. you reminded me i hate my own dad. damn good stuff
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A former member wrote:
holy shit...wow...utterly floored.(promptly dusts self off an slides back into computer chaired.) -zay
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On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, AHHH
(184) wrote:
nice...revenge is always entertaining in a peice
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A former member wrote:
parents suck but in the end its you who picks their old age home!!!!!!
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A former member wrote:
ok i liked this one.. maybe its cuz of my mom.. maybe its cuz ur cute.. idk but whatever it is i hope you let go of the anger after you write
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, WikidGrrl
(26) wrote:
very angry...father fucker...lol...i like that...
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
wow...so much anger in this one...but very nice flow of words there.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Wow! Lots of anger in this piece. Good poem. ~MS~
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck
(241) wrote:
indeed alot of anger...alot of justified anger. any man that would do this doesn't deserve the title of "father." they deserve a shallow, unmarked grave doused with the finest champagne that has been filtered through the kidneys of the scarred innocents
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, boundandfallen
(32) wrote:
i like this. i know how this story goes. very well done. congrats.