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- "awesome..i noticed if you read the lines in between each stanza it made sense...very nice"
Posted by sIo on "The Finding" by Lord Kalgalath
- "~imperfect vessel.. i cannot be made right~ so many times ive felt the same way, you expressed your pain beautifully ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "Flawed" by Lord Kalgalath
- "this was yummy, whips and chains and floggers ohhh my...very nice ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Slave" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Ouch.. I'm glad to see a new post by you.I've missed reading your stuff.. This was well executed, but painful at the same time. The priest lines were a good touch.. nice work dahling. <3Dommi"
Posted by Dommi on "Desecrated Oaths" by Lord Kalgalath
- "intense dedication.....reminds me of 'All Of My Love' by Led Zep....with this kind of love i would live forever:) elisa"
Posted by elisa on "Desecrated Oaths" by Lord Kalgalath
- "*sigh* the ending is almost... sweet, in it's subtle release from hope.. i love the soft rhyming throughout this, and it brought up many pictures and a feeling of the frenzy of pain."
Posted by Daemonicus on "Path to Tranquility" by Lord Kalgalath
- "...i can't stress enough that i really feel you here..."haze of pain
and bittersweet memory"...my god...breath taking beauty walking hand in hand with the angel of death...fucking killer."
Posted by suicideseason on "Path to Tranquility" by Lord Kalgalath
- "_damn,man...total blackness.i was with you every step of the way...we all seek some kind of sense in our lives...i know the feeling behind this poem well...you'll find your path.killer,man."
Posted by suicideseason on "Path to Tranquility" by Lord Kalgalath
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