Comments by All Members
- ""as the rain continued to fall
I wished it would slice through her umbrella" The wet feel of jazz is straight on, sketches of Miles (perfect); I can hear his jazz'd breathing & feel the rain. I love the 'dry & umbrella' motif. This poem is black & whi"
Posted by Unknown on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious
- "now this is just utterly superb,i understood every meaning behind it,loved the way you captured it,seriously impressive-faves"
Posted by Anth on "Our Patio" by shortandpretentious
- "...I can't understand why your work isn't more noticed by people here,seriously...I like this piece a lot..Something so...everyday,and normal,yet the amount that you seem to express here.....just..I love it.You have much talent my friend."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "the bic memorial" by shortandpretentious
- "Realy nice work ... and... thats the hinterland .. *thinks and smiles, then walks in on the patio and moons the crowd* Thats for the hinterland! Bite my hinter ass patio people!!!!!! *running away hiding*"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Our Patio" by shortandpretentious
- "'I never did,but i'll be damned if I wasn't dry all day'...Just as lyn said,you reach a level of of class here thats hard to touch...this is wonderful work,you capture the...mood...the astmosphere...perfectly.."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious
- "This is wonderful, so abstractly enchanting. The way you've put this across is absolutely perfect. I envisioned as a black and white movie.. 1920's.. you've reached a level of class that's hard to touch. Excellent work."
Posted by Lynaes on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious
