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Love Poem (#2)
By shortandpretentious
She turned to me and she said-
get this-
happiness is only a
nickle's throw away
to which I replied:
the cigars hidden in my
top left drawer
dance when it's closed
and mock me in the dark
that's why they're hidden
I don't think she understood
But she smiled a fake smile
As the cigars danced miles away
And the professor droned on.
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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Wednesday, September 15, 2004.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
I loved this piece! Excellent work! Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Mocking cigars hidden in a drawer? Dancing? *BIGSTUPIDGRIN* -Carl
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
ah man this is brilliance,smile inducing,superbly written,loved it
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
...I tottally agree with purr here..completely non-fake...I couldn't help but grin by the time I got to the end of this...I like it a lot!..Butterfly..xxx...
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
highly cool, this. :) made me smile a lot, non-fake... excellent write.
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
i would also have to agree here....i like it, ~saint~
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